Once a man of lofty ideals
He knew he had fallen from grace
Mocking jeers echoed behind his back
Apple chaser: a sore thumb, out of place
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He evades it all stealthily,
Like a chamois escapes its pack
Busies himself with mundane tasks
Till he’s a drained and empty cask
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At night, he’s at her bedside
Spouting old clumsy lies
The bills that keep piling up
Run through his weary mind
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With a notch, his heart divides
As he remembers what its all for
The center of his broken galaxy
That adoring gaze, those wide eyes
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Praying for timely deliverance
God, please give her a chance
Help her fight this uninvited guest
That threatens to take her life
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Dear Readers,
This has been in response to Wordle #73 by Mind Love Misery’s Menagerie.
Rules were as follows:
Use at least 10 of the words to create a story or poem
The words can appear in an alternate form
Use the words in any order that you like.
1. Hurry
2. Clumsy
3. Deliverance
4. Cask
5. Evade
6. Notch
7. Lofty
8. Galaxy
9. Chamois (an agile, goat-like antelope; a soft, pliable leather from any of various skinsdressed with oil, especially fish oil, originally prepared from the skin of the chamois.)
10. Uninvited
11. Apple-chaser (Someone willing to do anything, no matter how degrading, for any amount of money; named for the “road apples” left behind by horses)
12. Jeer
Those last two stanzas ripped my heart out, powerful piece wow!
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We all fight unseen battles in life, don’t we? Easy to judge others but each one has their own story. Thank you for reading and commenting.. means a lot !
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We absolutely do. We should spend more time listening and less judging
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WOW, this is Brilliant.
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Thanks Valida! On my way to read you response..
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A very sad poem…almost forgot it was a wordle. Excellent use of the words.
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Thank you so much Cressida.. for reading and commenting!
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