I tug at the necklace that hangs like a noose
Twisting and untwisting the strands between
As though gathering strength from within
Like an amateur acrobat on a deadly trapeze
–
It’s Lapis Lazuli, he had said with a grin
Tying it around my soft bulky neck
The beads, like your eyes, the deepest blue
With those gold streaks that glowed when you were sad
–
Mawkish and uncomfortable, I try not to balk
The smell of brimstone piercing my nostrils
I can’t bear to see him, I can’t bear to look away
I imagine all the blood that’s left his body, leaving only serum
–
He’d enabled me to perform his last rites
Much to the chagrin of his conniving ex-wife
He hadn’t wanted a coffin lowered down by unsteady hands
No ringside spectators examining his obsolescence
Ashes to ashes, he said, not dust to dust
By the coast of Cyprus, where we first met
He wished to lay in peace in that black earth.
–
On that last day, he held my hand tight
Those navy eyes moist, golden flecks sparked
He said “Darling, fate’s been cruel this time around,”
“But I will wait for you to find me, in my next life”
–
Dear Readers,
I’m catching up on all the cool Mind Love Misery’s Menagerie word prompts that I missed in the previous weeks. Here is my response to Wordle #86
The prompt words were as follows:
1.Cyprus
2. Ringside
3. Lapis Lazuli
4. Brimstone
5. Coffin
6. Hands
7. Acrobat
8. Strength
9. Mawkish (characterized by sickly sentimentality; weakly emotional; maudlin. Having amildly sickening flavor; slightly nauseating.)
10. Serum
11. Obsolescence (the state, process, or condition of being or becoming obsolete.)
12. Enable
Use at least 10 of the words to create a story or poem (these are hard!)
The words can appear in an alternate form
Use the words in any order that you like.
Thanks for reading π
I imagine all the blood thatβs left his body wow what a line I wish I had written that! This is a gorgeous piece and again an unexpected and effortless application of the wordle. Amazing work
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are truly too kind.. I am honoured and humbled by your feedback. It feels good to be back! π I very much enjoy your prompts.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am so happy to hear it! I always look forward to your responses =)
LikeLiked by 1 person
That means a lot to me, more than I can say! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very well done!!
LikeLike
Thank you Jael.. I sorta went crazy yesterday.. 3 prompts in one day π
LikeLike
Your motor’s runnin’!
LikeLike
You could say that! I saw your email just yesterday.. I’ve replied π
LikeLiked by 1 person
i like the direction you took this. I went completely in the opposite direction and ended up with a bit of a comedy. The repeated blue references are like a bow that ties the separate stanzas together. It gives the Lapis Lazuli reference heft making the word feel right at home instead of jarring. (I found it to be jarring in my own poem, which is why I had to complement your skill here with using it)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Melinda π I was trying to find your other prompt responses.. somehow couldn’t find them. Could you please link those to me?
With regard to this poem, I didn’t know what Lapis Lazuli was.. so I googled some pictures. I sort of weave the story around the hardest word sometimes, just to make sure that it fits. Doesn’t always work though! π Thank you for reading π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome. Here’s one: http://melindakucsera.com/2015/11/27/the-match/
I didn’t find the Menagerie until recently. So I have only done two wordles, 2 or 3 picture prompts and one or two other prompts from that blog. I don’t know if you’re interested in those.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m interested in everything.. link me right up! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Okay, Sunday’s photo prompt will go up on wednesday because of the narrative flow. Here’s the others I have done:
http://melindakucsera.com/2015/12/04/mistaken/
http://melindakucsera.com/2015/12/02/masks/
http://melindakucsera.com/2015/12/01/peace/
http://melindakucsera.com/2015/11/30/name-it/
http://melindakucsera.com/2015/11/27/black-friday-at-the-low-market/
http://melindakucsera.com/2015/11/26/spring-with-flair/
http://melindakucsera.com/2015/11/19/wishful-thinking/
Wow I did more than I realized.
LikeLiked by 1 person