Errant breeze whips through her white dress
Mud caked on bare feet, like a layer of glass.
Hair wild and cheeks flushed with effort,
She runs against herself, for the most part.
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A placid morning dew, now a prodigious storm;
Thunder and lightning orchestrating:
What a pseudo-emotional shivaree they’ve planned!
The elements seem to echo her tumultuous mind
She screams silently, raising delicate hands to the sky
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Breath fails her throat, a sharp stitch in the sides
Her elbow is grabbed suddenly from behind
She stares, mouth agape, at those half-dead eyes
Only telesthesia could save her now
(She laughs at that thought, somewhere, inside)
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She follows the man back like a docile lamb
Biting her lips to stop laughing,
Drinking rain and tears sliding down.
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Dear Readers,
Wow. It really has been a long time. I have no excuse for my absence except laziness and writer’s block. Maybe I celebrated the month after OctPoWriMo with a month of NoWriNo (No Writing November) Haha.
So here’s an attempt at Mind Love Misery’s Wordle #87 to try to get back into poetry writing. I am pretty rusty so please do bear with me.
The words we had for the prompt this week are as follows:
1.Elbow
2. Emotional
3. Docile
4. Glass
5. Shivaree (a mock serenade with kettles, pans, horns, and other noise makers given for a newly married couple; charivari. Informal. an elaborate, noisy celebration.)
6. Cake
7. Prodigious (extraordinary in size, amount, extent, degree, force, etc.: a prodigious research grant. wonderful or marvelous: a prodigious feat. abnormal; monstrous.)
8. Dress
9. Telesthesia (sensation or perception received at a distance without the normal operation of the recognized sense organs.)
10. Dew
11. White (Not in the wordle but I can only find 11 words if you spot the 12th let me know if not will just use white!)
12. Errant
Use at least 10 of the words to create a story or poem (these are hard!)
The words can appear in an alternate form
Use the words in any order that you like.
Hope you enjoyed it.
I missed you all, and I hope to get back to writing :)!
Welcome back!
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Thank you linley! 🙂
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I am so happy to see you! This is a sensory feast! Brilliant and elegant use of the wordle. I especially love how you used shivaree and that you didn’t go the obvious route. The ending makes me wonder what will become of the poor girl
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Thank you ! I’m not sure what will become of her… if she’ll be okay.. I hope she will be. I felt pretty rusty writing this one.. it didn’t end up being what I thought it would be when I wrote the first verse.
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Poems have a life of their own and characters, I find, direct their own affairs regardless of our wishes. I have been writing a lot and I have suddenly hit a wall and forgotten how to do it
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Oh I know the wall you speak of.. I hit it quite often. It makes me want to tear up everything I write and delete every word I type But with greater courage comes greater understanding of oneself and one’s abilities.
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Very true though I no longer allow myself to delete, I have to sit with it, work through it
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You write brilliantly, there is nothing to fear. Let it soar and watch it fly.
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Thank you so much that means a lot =)
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Wow, what a sharp ending line!
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Hallooo Jael! Thank you so much sweetie 🙂 How you been??
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