Grief
Forsake
Push the brake
Give life a chance
There’s not much you can’t take
Shake out of your misery trance
Rise from the ashes of your long term plans
In the grand scheme of things, our time here is so brief
Why wait on the sidelines, when you can dance?
The only thing you can change, is your stance
Happiness, you can make
Progress, advance
Fear: let’s break
That fake
Thief
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Dear Readers,
I chose this style of poetry, thinking that it looked interesting and fun. Now, I have a headache :p
Jokes aside, this was one of the hardest styles I have tried till date, which is saying a lot. Looking at the end result, I’m fairly happy with what I’ve achieved after following all the parameters 🙂
This is the Diatelle form, developed by Bradley Vrooman. Basically, the poem has 15 lines with a fixed syllable form and rhyme scheme. The syllable count for each line goes like this 1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1 (making a diamond shape) and the rhyme scheme (!) is abbcbccaccbcbba.
This form reminds me of a Diamante and an Etheree, both of which I have attempted (and were easier).
I implore you to read this poem twice.. not for any particular reason, other than that it took a lot of effort to write :p And, if you find any mistakes in the syllable count or rhyme scheme.. close your eyes and turn the other way XD
Have a great day!
Reference: www.shadowpoetry.com
The form is nice and you’ve done it quite impressively… 🙂
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Oh don’t tell me.. I doubt I could ever do it again. Had a headache the whole day 😛 But yes, I can say I wrote it once! Thanks Maniparna for reading.. appreciate it a lot.
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Welcome, dear…. hope you are doing great now… 🙂
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I’m.. getting there, Maniparna. Thank you so much for asking.
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Welcome…glad to know that…. 🙂
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I have read more than twice 🙂 In addition to style, the thought and the words are amazing.
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Thank you so much Varnam, for visiting my site and taking the time to read and comment. Really appreciate it!
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